We plan on doing a guy/gal pacing in a locked room (so
he/she thinks it is locked) then finds a ball when coming back its two times
before he notices a ball in front of the door. He/she picks up the red bouncy
ball and bounces it really hard against a wall. And it losses control and goes
all over the place and knocks he/she out cold. When he/she wakes up they see
the ball grow arms and legs. Then walks out of the room. Then he/she tries to
get out of the room and then door shut in he/she’s face. Then he/she says what
the hack ball!!!!!!!!!
1. What do you believe is the moral or root message of the story?
ReplyDeleteThe message of the story was don't get locked in.
2. What emotions are going to be evoked in this story?
Funny and shock
3. What could be added to the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not) Just make the theme a bit more obvious.
4. What could be removed from the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not) I think its good the way it is.
I believe the moral root of the story is the irony of the simplest and smallest things.
ReplyDeleteThe emotions during this story is happiness and humour.
Nothing can be added or taken from the story because the message gets through without any extras or anything else it needs.
1.Be careful about the actions you take, the end result may not be pleasant.
ReplyDelete2.Comedy
3.It's actually fine as it is, so nothing more needs to be added or taken out.
ReplyDelete1. I believe that the moral of the story is that the that everything is possible, if you make the right action.
2. Humor and confusion
FIne the way it is
ReplyDeleteDon't let anger make you throw things, it can come back to harm you
Humor, confusion, anger
You could show him/her trying to get out of the room, instead of just pacing the floor
Maybe instead of having the person coming back to the ball, have it appear out of no where making it a little more creepy