The Bunny and the Rat
Once upon a time a rat and a bunny
where getting ready for a animal party. The bunny, raised in a home of rich and
popular, was wearing a big silky pink bow around her groomed black neck. On the
other hand the rat, lived with a outsider, the white fur was untidy and his
teeth were sharp. They owners look
at each other with disgusted as they released their beloved pet with
others. The other animals were
playing with a red ball and the two ran after it. SMACK! Both the bunny and the rat collided with each other
as they tried pounced on the ball.
The rabbit noticed that her once groomed was untidy and for the first
time it felt nice, while the rat was rolled on the floor laughing at the black
rabbit as her bow wrapped around him. They hung out the rest of the party, just like their
owners.
1. friendship comes in unlikely places.
ReplyDelete2. disgust and happiness.
3. they were friends forever-after,
4. not to be a grammer-nazi but the bad spelling.
Grammar*
DeleteDid you mean *Grammar?
Delete1. Friendship can come from anyone
ReplyDelete2. Crazy/fun
3. make the colors of the owner and animals match, portraying even more that they are like there owner
4. perfect lenth
you don't have to be with people like you.
ReplyDeletefriendship, and happiness
the rabbits reaction to how the ruffled fur felt
dont change anything
1. It doesn't matter if your rich or poor, you can become friends regardless
ReplyDelete2. Fun and zaniness
3. The colors should represent the owners type of social status.
4. Nothing else needs to be added or removed.
1. What do you believe is the moral or root message of the story?
ReplyDeleteFriends can be a value
2. What emotions are going to be evoked in this story?
Crazy Party Fun
3. What could be added to the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)
New dress color
4. What could be removed from the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)
The bad spelling
1. What do you believe is the moral or root message of the story?
ReplyDeleteYou don't have to be with people you don't like.
2. What emotions are going to be evoked in this story?
fun
3. What could be added to the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)
new dress color
4. What could be removed from the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)
the bad spelling
1. What do you believe is the moral or root message of the story?
ReplyDeleteyou don't have to be with people like you.
2. What emotions are going to be evoked in this story?
3. What could be added to the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)
4. What could be removed from the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)