The story starts on From a
flower leaf with a dew drop on the leaf. that falls to the ground and a male water figure
appears. He looks around and lightning hits next to him and a
female fire figure is created. The two see each other, fall in love automatically and so the
boy tries to touch the girls shoulder and they both just back from the
burn/cooling pain. The girl and boy not wanting to leave each other hold hands
tight, even though it is burning, and both their arms become obsidian like. After that the two walk away into the distance.
1. i think the moral is love hurts
ReplyDelete2. the emotions are love and pain
3. they try to have a kid but both turn to obsidian and never go back 2 normal.
4. it is perfecto dont remove anything.
1. don't give up on love, even if it hurts,
ReplyDelete2. Sadness, and then happiness
3. I think Dialogue, or expression work would contribute to the story,
4. I would take out the dew from the leaf, and just make him a product of the rain, since lightning usually occurs during rain storms.
1. That opposites can attract. And some love can never be separated.
ReplyDelete2.Confusion, Happiness.
3. Nothing is makes perfect sense the story is told how it is going to be, you shouldn't change a thing.
1- Make compromises for those whom you love
ReplyDelete2- Happiness
3- Have the Boy/Girl Nervous
4- Not a thing.
you alway find love in different people
ReplyDeletesadness and happiness
make them shy at first
nothing