1. That he wasn't paying attention to what the affect of hitting the tree would be. 2.He's sad because he valued his truck a lot. 3.Why was he cutting the tree. Or what happened to his truck afterward. 4. I wouldn't take anything out i would just add more.
1. Karma is a pain 2. Sadness 3. Why is the man so upset about his truck? (you could add something to show why he loves the truck so much. 4. Don't remove anything
He could put a lot of time and effort into cutting the tree down so, its that much more painful for him when it hits his truck. Maybe make the truck look new..
You might not have to show the man driving the truck, you could just show him getting out of it.
1. That he wasn't paying attention to what the affect of hitting the tree would be.
ReplyDelete2.He's sad because he valued his truck a lot.
3.Why was he cutting the tree. Or what happened to his truck afterward.
4. I wouldn't take anything out i would just add more.
1- Prepare before you act
ReplyDelete2- Sadness
3- A slow falling of the tree with the man running towards his truck
4- Running to the truck
1. Karma is a pain
ReplyDelete2. Sadness
3. Why is the man so upset about his truck? (you could add something to show why he loves the truck so much.
4. Don't remove anything
Pay Attention to what you're doing
ReplyDeleteAnger, sadness
He could put a lot of time and effort into cutting the tree down so, its that much more painful for him when it hits his truck. Maybe make the truck look new..
You might not have to show the man driving the truck, you could just show him getting out of it.