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Monday, November 4, 2013

Story by Billyjoe Cruz


The story that I’m going to write is about this girl that I meet in the school she doesn’t know where to go because she is new in this school so I showed her around the school she meet a new people then a couple day’s ago we start falling for each other then that day we became a close friends then I realized that if I ask her out it’ll get better because we can help each other at school when I waited in the right time to ask her out that day when I ask her out she yes that’s the most happiest day of my life then when I got a problem in my class and I told her about it she help me a lot, if she wasn’t their for me then no one will help me on my bad grades I was thankful for her.




  • Its is school appropriate because it about me and a new student at school fell in love for each other and we are helping each other if we have a problem in school grades.

  • this data is inspire animators because it’s about me and I meet a new girl at this school and she doesn’t know where to go and we became close friends and the next day of that is we were dating.

  • The moral/message is you better respectful to a new student and be nice and show her around the school and let her meet a new friends.

  • The climax is we became a close friends and we start dating.

  • The visual style and color the style is we fell give her a flower and the color is orange.

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