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Thursday, October 31, 2013

My Story


2 comments:

  1. 1. What do you believe is the moral or root message of the story?
    Everything can be achieved through hard work.
    2. What emotions are going to be evoked in this story?
    anger and bravery
    3. What could be added to the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)superpowers

    4. What could be removed from the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)
    the violence

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  2. If You Work Hard you can become the best at something. Working hard can be rewarding.

    A lot of Anger or Bravery.

    I think character should collect an item from each character he defeats.

    I think that the story is good as is. If something were removed it may cause confusion.

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