1. What do you believe is the moral or root message of the story? the moral of the story is that good will happen even without us trying 2. What emotions are going to be evoked in this story? The emotion i feel is evoked in this story is fear, for example when the guy pulls out the gun. 3. What could be added to the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not) I believe if the backstory of the robber were added it would make for a better story. 4. What could be removed from the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not) The actions of what the people are doing could be removed, like the guy buying candy.
1. What do you believe is the moral or root message of the story? the moral of the story is that good will happen even without us trying
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fear, for example when the guy pulls out the gun.
3. What could be added to the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)
I believe if the backstory of the robber were added it would make for a better story.
4. What could be removed from the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)
The actions of what the people are doing could be removed, like the guy buying candy.