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Wednesday, October 30, 2013

Blowing out of Proportion


A blowfish will be swimming in the ocean all by himself, until a man with a net comes and tries to catch him.  He finally freaks out so much that he blows up and starts to float into the sky.  He floats in the sky through the day and the night, until he hits something and pops.  He falls back to the ground and lands in the boat that was previously trying to catch him. 

4 comments:

  1. 1. you can't run from death.
    2. comedy
    3. i think the story is fine how is.
    4. i do not believe anything needs to e removed .

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  2. Ohh noo!!! haha poor blowfish!:) thats really funny!

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  3. 1. Death can't be escape
    2. Comedy
    3. Make the ship look like a target when the blowfish is coming back to earth.
    4. Nothing needs changed.

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  4. do not have a panic atack

    laughter, and sorrow

    dont add anything

    dont change anything

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