1. What do you believe is the moral or root message of the story? don't be distracted from what is really important 2. What emotions are going to be evoked in this story? curiosity, which ironically involved a cat 3. What could be added to the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not) more detail as to how the portal got there 4. What could be removed from the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not) the berry part, it is very anticlimactic to the story
1. What do you believe is the moral or root message of the story?
ReplyDeletedon't be distracted from what is really important
2. What emotions are going to be evoked in this story?
curiosity, which ironically involved a cat
3. What could be added to the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)
more detail as to how the portal got there
4. What could be removed from the story to help communicate the message? (You must provide input, radical or not)
the berry part, it is very anticlimactic to the story